Two days ago on Tuesday after school I had hokey games. My sister and my brother were playing hockey too. They were in the same team then me. We won each game. We played the blacks and we won that round. Then we played against me and my team each game we won even we were a little team and the other team was big well they had more kids and our team had less kids. Even if there is less kids in the team it das not mean that we won't win
Any way sport is not about winning it’s about having fun.
Hi I am Peter From Yaldhurst Model school. I like Hockey too. I agree with you sport is a game that is not about winning it is about having fun and play games It is a good blog maybe you can make another one about other sport
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Hi I am Lucy from Yaldhurst Model School, I am year 6.
ReplyDeleteI really like this blog post. I like the quote at the end. You also added lots of detail.
Next time you could add a photo or GIF to make it more intristing.
I also think it would be a good idea to separte your writing into 2 or 3 paragraphs to make it easier to read
Overall Its really good :)
Kind Regards
From Lucy