Monday, April 20, 2020

My poam

Little, big, tall and short 
Only some people will survive
Very tall and short people will die 
Early in the sunset
And in the morning we will remember them.
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4 comments:

  1. LotteApril 20, 2020 at 11:23 AM

    scrorll down to see all of my poam

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  2. AnonymousApril 20, 2020 at 1:44 PM

    Hello Lotte,
    I am Alan from yaldhurst model school.

    I really liked how you wrote that song.

    The only thing missing is rhyming words.
    Kind regards
    Alan

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  3. Mandy DoddsApril 23, 2020 at 10:40 AM

    Well done, Lotte. I like your poem. You have really thought about what ANZAC means.

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  4. Ashleigh Molloy-SmithApril 25, 2020 at 12:40 PM

    Well done Lotte great poem

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