Hello Lotte! My name is Hana and I'm a year 6 from Yaldhurst Model School!
Some of these are key things to surviving on an island. Like matches, water, food, or a fishing rod/net.
I probably would bring some of these things, but along with something special. Like... A jet plane, a jet plane pilot, food, water, a map, and some other things. :D I mean, a jet plane and a jet plane pilot already has you sorted...
Next time, try to add some kind of DLO to make your blog post interesting. Make it colourful so people want to read it too!
Hello Lotte, Cool post. Maybe to improve you could write why you picked them or you could write why you had to do this. It would be cool if you said what colour your things are. I hope that you have a very good trip B3.
I really liked your blog idea. The survival thing etc... It is also very useful all the people who check your blog. Something new that you can learn.
Anyway, for improvement you could add the list in a dlo. Make a google drawing, design it and put all this list in it. It would really make the most catchy.
Hello Lotte! My name is Hana and I'm a year 6 from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteSome of these are key things to surviving on an island. Like matches, water, food, or a fishing rod/net.
I probably would bring some of these things, but along with something special. Like... A jet plane, a jet plane pilot, food, water, a map, and some other things. :D I mean, a jet plane and a jet plane pilot already has you sorted...
Next time, try to add some kind of DLO to make your blog post interesting. Make it colourful so people want to read it too!
I hope you survive with your chosen equipment! :D
- Hana
Hello Lotte,
ReplyDeleteCool post. Maybe to improve you could write why you picked them or you could write why you had to do this. It would be cool if you said what colour your things are.
I hope that you have a very good trip B3.
Hayley:)
Hi Lotte,
ReplyDeleteI am Albin from YMS.
I really liked your blog idea. The survival thing etc... It is also very useful all the people who check your blog. Something new that you can learn.
Anyway, for improvement you could add the list in a dlo. Make a google drawing, design it and put all this list in it. It would really make the most catchy.
Kind regards,
Albin